Dialogue Exercise

Use this line of dialogue in a short story:

"I don't know why Sarah wore that hat. Honestly, she looked like she had a pancake on her head."

2 comments:

Merlene said...

I don't know why Sarah wore that hat. Honestly, she looked like she had a pancake on her head. On second glance I saw it was a pancake, soon to be joined by others slowly peeling off the ceiling. Sarah always knew how to make a fashion statement in any setting.

firstlinefiction said...

That is fabulous, Merlene!!! I love it. Thanks so much for sharing.

Best,
Lori